感谢多多_500字

时间:2012-09-18 13:55:24

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   江西省南城二中盱笛文学社 高一 吴昌南

  我是南城二中高一1班的学生,名叫吴昌南,母亲是南城二中职工。在我幼小的时候,父亲就去世,母亲独自一人带我,而母亲又是残疾,走路很不方便。家里仅靠母亲每月710元微薄的收入勉强维持生活,又要租房子,每月租金也要150元,除水电在外的,家里经济确实十分困难。母亲又不是本地人,在南城可以说是举目无亲,学校又没有房子安排给我们,每当开学的时候,母亲总是愁眉苦脸。就在这个时候,江西省民政厅饶剑明厅长,南城二中李应根老师,实验中学游松平校长,黎川县顾波县长,79级抚州师专中文系全班同学都对我家伸出了援助之手,资助我6500元,供我读完九年义务教育。我在此由衷地对政府,对以上的恩人们表示感谢,同时我还要感谢在多方面帮助过我的班主任周伟群老师,毛小勇、王伟安、周向阳等各位老师,谢谢他们对我们的关心和厚爱,我将以优异的成绩回报你们,回报社会。

  简评:这篇习作虽篇幅短小,但句句充满真情,质朴语言中充满了对社会、政府及所有关心过自己家的恩人们的无限感激之情,表达了自己将以优异成绩回报社会回报恩人的决心和行动。(语文老师:朱志远)

高一:xlwxs99

英文版:

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Wu Changnan, senior one, xudi literature society, No.2 Middle School, Nancheng, Jiangxi Province

My name is Wu Changnan. My mother is an employee of Nancheng No.2 Middle School. When I was young, my father died, my mother took me alone, and my mother was disabled and it was very inconvenient to walk. The family is barely able to live on her mother's meager income of 710 yuan per month. She has to rent a house. The monthly rent is 150 yuan. In addition to water and electricity, the family economy is really very difficult. My mother is not a native. In Nancheng, she is unaccompanied. There is no house for us in the school. When school starts, my mother always looks sad. At this time, Rao Jianming, director of Jiangxi Provincial Civil Affairs Department, Li Yinggen, teacher of Nancheng No.2 Middle School, you Songping, President of experimental middle school, GuBo county magistrate of Lichuan County, and all the students of the Chinese Department of Fuzhou Teachers College of grade 79, all extended their helping hands to my family, subsidizing me 6500 yuan to complete the nine-year compulsory education. I would like to express my sincere thanks to the government and the above benefactors. At the same time, I would also like to thank the teacher Zhou Weiqun, Mao Xiaoyong, Wang Weian, Zhou Xiangyang and other teachers who have helped me in many ways. I would like to thank them for their care and love for us. I will repay you and the society with my outstanding achievements.

Brief comment: Although the length of this exercise is short, the sentences are full of true feelings. The simple language is full of infinite gratitude to the society, the government and all the benefactors who have cared about their families. It expresses his determination and action to repay the benefactor with outstanding achievements. (Chinese teacher: Zhu Zhiyuan)

Senior one: xlwxs99