小升初作文写作指导:状物作文写作方法_550字

时间:2019-07-06 23:08:24

  状物,就是把动物、植物、静物(主要指日用品、工艺品、玩具、特产和建筑物)如实地、细致地、准确地描绘出来,使人感到逼真,栩栩如生,如见其物。


  动物是儿童的天使。喜爱小动物是每个孩子的天性。大人们每当回忆儿童时代的生活,总是忘不了小动物如何萌发他们的童心和爱心,忘不了那充满童稚和情趣的与小动物相处的美好时光。所以,描写小动物是小学生不可缺少的作文题目。


  大自然是美的,那郁郁葱葱、四季常青的树木,那千姿百态、万紫千红的花卉,以其形状、色彩、功能,装点着大自然,也装点着人民的生活,为我们创造了一个美丽宜人、多姿多彩的环境,为人类提供了各种不可缺少的资源。我们的生存、生活离不开植物,更何况孩子们爱花爱草,因而,植物也成了小学生作文的丰富题材。


  至于其他实物,如学习用品、生活用品和建筑物,更是我们每天都要接触到,谁也离不开它。学会说明实物也是十分重要的。


  【思路点拨】


  怎样把动物写活


  许多同学很喜欢动物,有的还亲自饲养动物,可是,有的同学一写起动物来一点儿也不生动形象。怎样让动物栩栩如生地跃然纸上,把动物写“活”呢?


  一、仔细观察写活。我们要做生活的有心人,平时多接触各类动物。如家禽家畜:鸡、鸭、鹅、牛、马、羊、猪……有条件的可以精心饲养这些动物,留心观察这些动物的外形特点、颜色、生活习性。“下马观花”,做好观察笔记,才能对某种动物了如指掌,胸有成竹......


英文版:

Shape object is to describe animals, plants and still life (mainly referring to daily necessities, handicrafts, toys, specialties and buildings) truthfully, meticulously and accurately, so as to make people feel lifelike and lifelike.

Animals are the angels of children. It is the nature of every child to love small animals. When adults recall their childhood life, they always can't forget how small animals germinate their childlike innocence and love, and the wonderful time of getting along with small animals full of childishness and interest. Therefore, the description of small animals is an indispensable composition topic for primary school students.

Nature is beautiful. The lush, evergreen trees and colorful flowers decorate nature and people's life with their shapes, colors and functions, creating a beautiful and pleasant and colorful environment for us and providing various indispensable resources for human beings. Our survival and life are inseparable from plants, not to mention the children love flowers and grass, so plants have become a rich theme of primary school students' composition.

As for other objects, such as school supplies, daily necessities and buildings, we are exposed to them every day, and no one can do without them. It's also important to learn how to explain things.

[train of thought]

How to write animals alive

Many students like animals very much. Some of them even raise animals themselves. However, some students are not vivid when they write about animals. How to make animals vivid on paper?

1. Observe the writing carefully. We should be conscientious people and contact with all kinds of animals at ordinary times. Such as domestic poultry and livestock: chickens, ducks, geese, cattle, horses, sheep, pigs If conditions permit, we can carefully raise these animals and observe their appearance, color and living habits. Only when you get off the horse and watch the flowers well, can you know something about certain animals